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Crafting a Perfectly-sized Universe - a guest blog on the length of poetry by Simon Lamb

Posted By Jacob Hope, 25 September 2025

We are delighted to welcome Simon Lamb, author of a Passing on of Shells, back to the blog to celebrate the publication of his latest book, the inventive and imaginative Mat o'Shanter - a witty and wry reimagining of Robert Burns' Tam o'Shanter. 

Simon has been a primary school teacher, has reviewed books, performed poetry at numerous festivals and has been Scriever at the Robert Burns Birthplace Museum.  Here Simon offers a fascinating insight into the length of poems exploring an impressive array of poets and poems along the way.



No matter where I go, in Scotland, the UK, or even abroad, I am pursued on my travels by one persistent question. It glugs around the room, regardless of venue, unspoken, till, when the time comes in our workshop to put pen to paper, a voice pipes out its name. How long does my poem need to be?

 

I do not think the question comes from a place of how-quickly-can-I-make-this-nightmare-end-?, not at all. Rather, I believe the questioner simply wants – demands? – parameters. Give them a sheet of calculations and they’re done once the calculations are completed. Give them the task of composing a short story and even the slight tick-box structure of beginning-middle-end gives them a goal to which to aim. But give them the freedom of writing a poem – particularly one without a prescribed form – and the world of success criteria caves in.

 

The answer to the question can be only this: your poem should be as long as it needs to be.

In my first book, A Passing On of Shells (Scallywag Press, 2023), each poem was written in exactly fifty words. When quizzed on why, I would reply that the six-word story was too short; flash-fiction’s hundred-words too long. For me, fifty was the Goldilocks number. That is not to say I only ever want to write poems of fifty words in length, just that it felt right for those particular poems in that particular book. They were still as long as they needed to be.

 

Scottish poet Don Paterson makes a convincing argument in 101 Sonnets (Faber & Faber, 1999) that a sonnet’s fourteen lines create the “perfect” length for a poem. (I’m inclined to agree: my legacy as writer-inresidence at the Robert Burns Birthplace Museum in Alloway, Ayrshire, is a series of six sonnets inspired by the museum’s six sites. It’s a very attractive and addictive form!) The time it takes to read a sonnet, to listen to it spoken aloud, the space it takes up on a page, the almost-square shape of its existence… And yet, still, the best sonnets are those that feel right to be a sonnet, fourteen lines. As long as they need to be.

 

My most-taught poem in schools comes from Zaro Weil’s CLiPPA-winning collection of poetry, Cherry Moon (Troika, 2019). The poem is called ‘Plum Tree (Summer)’. It runs to a mere eighteen words. Add or remove even a single word and I am convinced you would diminish the piece’s completeness. As a grand advocate of teaching poetry over form, this poem gives and gives: immediacy, repetition, property as noun, simile, first-person voice, stanza/gap, questioning, sass! I could go on. Weil’s tiny masterpiece is as long as it needs to be; its world is complete and awaits only a reader.

 

When reviewing my debut poetry collection, A. F. Harrold noted that short poems have always appealed to him, being so much easier to keep in one’s head than great long epics. (Harrold’s latest book, by the way, is Pocket Book of Pocket Poems (Bloomsbury, 2025), with entries starting at sixty-word poems and reducing in length through the course of the book. Don’t miss the “Thematic Contents Index List Thingie”.) But great long epics do have their place. Our storytelling culture is founded upon them. In 2026, Christopher Nolan – one of Hollywood’s hottest film directors – will bring his take on The Odyssey to the big screen, no doubt bringing a whole new generation to the ancient Greek epic.

 

In 1790, Scottish poet Robert Burns wrote his own epic — with parallels to The Odyssey, it should be noted. (A mock odyssey? McOdyssey? Don’t steal that; I’m having that.) Late one market day night, farmer Tam drunkenly quests home through a biblical storm. It’s ‘Tam o’ Shanter’. And it is excellent. A classic of Scottish literature and one of my favourite poems. And, yes, you know what I’m going to say next: at 228 lines, it is just as long as it needs to be.

 

My new book is a spiritual sequel, a redux, and something entirely all its own. It’s Mat o’ Shanter. Running to 228 lines, my modern-day adventure takes all of the narrative beats of the original and reverentially spins a new version for the ears and eyes and hearts of today. Just as Nolan looks to bring Odysseus et al. to new viewers with his big screen bonanza, I hope to bring Tam and his cronies to new readers, turning his tale anew. I hope they will agree the poem’s as long as it needs to be.

 

While the draw of the satisfaction of completing a sonnet (14), a limerick (5), a haiku (3) is strong, I suggest that when it comes to poetry – especially poetry without the constraints of form – we focus on what is best for the poem at hand. When asked, How long does my poem need to be?, encourage the writer, whatever their age, to be brave enough to write the poem as long as it needs to be.

 

That plum tree lives forever in its five-line world. The drunken Scotsman lives forever in his 228-line epic. Be brave enough to write the poem you are writing; trust in your ability to craft a perfectly-sized universe.


A big thank you to Simon Lamb for this fascinating blog and to Sarah Pakenham at Scallywag Press for the opportunity.


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An Interview with Valerie Bloom

Posted By Jacob Hope, 27 July 2022

 

Valerie Bloom is the 2022 winner of the CLiPPA award with her impressively wide-reaching collection Stars with Flaming Tails.  We were delighted to have the opportunity to talk with Valerie about her work, career and collection.


You were born and grew up in Jamaica.  What role did poetry play in your childhood and did you write as a child?


I grew up listening to poetry.   My mother and grandmother used to recite poetry all the time. Two favourites of theirs were The Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner and Casabianca.  The Jamaican Poet, The Honorable Louise Bennett Coverley was a household name and I remember every weekday sitting around the radio with my family and listening to her mid-day programme, “Miss Lou’s Views”.


As children, we were encouraged to memorise the poetry of the Bible, and every morning and evening we’d recite a psalm during family worship.


 Then there was the National Festival where poetry was performed alongside the other art forms. The medal winners would usually be featured on the television, so we would be seeing poetry being performed all summer. At school I was always being coached to enter the festival though we never actually went. I think the logistics of taking kids from rural Jamaica to the capital for the competition was just too much for my teachers.


As soon as I could write I started making up poems and stories.  The first was published when I was twelve.

 

 


You moved to the UK in 1979, what were your early impressions and experiences of the country?


First impression was probably the same as that experienced by many people coming to the UK from a tropical country – cold.  In the middle of July, I kept asking if it was about to snow. I couldn’t imagine that it would get any colder. It was the first time I’d experienced cold sunshine.


Then I was struck by the beauty of the vegetation – the profusion of colours in the flowers.  I was quite distressed when winter arrived and I thought all the trees had died! 


If I was walking through my town in Jamaica and I made eye-contact with someone without saying hello, I would be considered ill-mannered.  I soon learnt that here, if you greeted people on the streets with a cheery “good morning”, you’d receive some strange looks.


I was invited to a poetry reading a little while after I got here and was expecting a performance such as I was used to in our oral tradition. I was amazed when the poet stood and read from his book the entire evening. I’d never seen that before.

 



Your first collection of poetry was Touch Mi, Tell Mi, can you tell us a little about how that came to be?


I’d been writing poems in Jamaican before I came to the UK. Soon after I arrived, I was approached by someone from the Jamaican Society in Manchester. They had been living here for some time and wanted to form a choir to sing Jamaican folk songs but had forgotten the words. They asked if I could help. I taught and choreographed the songs and soon they were performing around the country. 


To add some variety, I would perform a poem or two and people soon started inviting me to give solo performances of the poems.  At the performances I’d be asked where they could get the book but I didn’t have one.   


I was invited to do a weekly slot reading my poems on Radio Manchester and would write a poem during the week and read it on the radio the following Sunday.  


I went to see Jessica Huntley from Bogle L’Overture Books, clutching a handful of these poems, and asked if she would like to publish them. To my amazement, she said yes immediately. The rest is history.


 

There's a wonderful cadence and musicality to your poetry.  Does reading aloud or performance form part of the writing process for you?


When I’m writing I often think about how the poem is going to be performed. Poems are designed to be read aloud. They are as much about sound as they are about the words, so performance and oral delivery are important considerations when I’m writing. Sometime the performance even comes to me before the words and then I find the language to go with the actions.  I write a lot on trains, planes and in hotel rooms and sometimes I forget where I am and start acting out a poem I’m writing on the train.  I come to my senses when I realise the people around me are looking a little alarmed.

 

 

You've written across a broad range of forms - novels, poetry, for the radio and also for the jazz ensemble, Grand Union Orchestra - what has been the most exciting writing experience for you and why?


I did a one woman show for the Children’s Book Show some years ago. That was pretty exciting as we toured around the UK, but also I was able to incorporate story-telling, songs, movement, not just poetry. 

 

 

Stars with Flaming Tails is your most recent collection and there's a very experimental and playful element to the subjects and forms explored.  How do you go about writing and selecting the poems for a collection?


I’m always writing, so at any given time I have some poems which have not been published.  When I’m putting a collection together, I go through those poems to see which ones I’d like to use and then write others that would go well with them, whether in terms of themes, language or subject matter.  In the case of Stars with Flaming Tails, I got a bit carried away and wrote way too many poems for the book.  The fact that I had the sections into which the book is divided seemed to make it easier to write poems to fit those categories.  In the end it was Janetta at Otter-Barry books who helped me to decide on the final selection.

 

 

Children's poetry has not always received the attention it deserves, it feels to be in an exciting place with the CLiPPA, with Joseph Coelho being announced as the new Children's Laureate and with Manchester's new Poetry Library.  What do you think poetry has to offer?


Among other things, poetry develops self-awareness and empathy, is an outlet for self-expression and it helps children to make sense of the world around them.  It’s been shown to aid in cognitive development and encourages creative expression.  It frees children from the restrictions of grammatical rules, making them more willing and able to explore their emotions in their writing and because it’s usually a short piece of literature, it means it’s appealing to reluctant readers and writers. 

 

 

Can you give readers any insight as to what might be next for you?

 

There’s a chapter book coming out soon and I’m now working on another book of poetry.  Other projects are just in their embryonic stages so I can’t talk about them yet.

 

 

A huge thank you to Valerie Bloom for the interview and to Andrea Reece for the opportunity.

 

 

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